Tuesday, May 24, 2016
Sunday, May 15, 2016
Car Raid Preview
1. My subject for my car raid is a friend of my older brother's.
2. During the weekend. It's the easiest time for both of our schedules to do the car raid.
3.
What kind of car is this? What model?
How old is this car? When did you get it? (Follow-up)
How did you get this car? (i.e. Was it a gift from your parents? Did you buy it yourself?)
Where do you drive in this car?
Why did you put [this] in your car?
What's the most memorable moment you've had in your car?
4. I'll write down the type and color of the car, and the state of the condition that the car is in. I'll write down the outside condition, like if it's perfectly clean or muddy or scratched or dented, and I'll write down the inside condition, like if it's clean or messy, the type of seats, and the smell of the car. Most importantly to this writing, I'll write down the items within the car. Maybe trash from that person's lunch, or ornaments hanging from the mirror.
2. During the weekend. It's the easiest time for both of our schedules to do the car raid.
3.
What kind of car is this? What model?
How old is this car? When did you get it? (Follow-up)
How did you get this car? (i.e. Was it a gift from your parents? Did you buy it yourself?)
Where do you drive in this car?
Why did you put [this] in your car?
What's the most memorable moment you've had in your car?
4. I'll write down the type and color of the car, and the state of the condition that the car is in. I'll write down the outside condition, like if it's perfectly clean or muddy or scratched or dented, and I'll write down the inside condition, like if it's clean or messy, the type of seats, and the smell of the car. Most importantly to this writing, I'll write down the items within the car. Maybe trash from that person's lunch, or ornaments hanging from the mirror.
Thursday, May 12, 2016
Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Friday, May 6, 2016
Merger Photo
1. I think the wind could be a problem if there's a strong gust and it's moving the trees or your hair. Another problem could be the timer and getting to the right spot on time. You have to set the timer long enough for you to get to the spot you want to photograph and then get into position and stay still until the photo is taken.
2. Out in the field by the track. It's a wide open field usually the field is undisturbed, though you'd want to be photographing away from the track to avoid getting someone moving in the background.
3. Cartwheels would be great, but you'd probably need a good shutter speed for that and very good timing. But it'd also be cool to photograph a battlefield. You fighting yourself and other copies of you fighting each other or on the ground.
4. I think what you wear depends on what your doing. For example, if you posed a sort of battle with yourself, then you would need specific props for that. Most of all, you need to wear colors that would show up against your background.
2. Out in the field by the track. It's a wide open field usually the field is undisturbed, though you'd want to be photographing away from the track to avoid getting someone moving in the background.
3. Cartwheels would be great, but you'd probably need a good shutter speed for that and very good timing. But it'd also be cool to photograph a battlefield. You fighting yourself and other copies of you fighting each other or on the ground.
4. I think what you wear depends on what your doing. For example, if you posed a sort of battle with yourself, then you would need specific props for that. Most of all, you need to wear colors that would show up against your background.
Thursday, May 5, 2016
Warm-Up
WARM-UP
1.
These were my two favorite photos out of all the sample photos.
2. A lot of these images seem like they could have been taken with a professional camera, though admittedly some of them definitely could have been taken with a high-quality photo.
3. If the photographer used an app that might use filters to change the tone and lighting of the photo or apps that they could Photoshop the images, then the quality of the photos may not actually be determined by the quality of the phone but more by the type of apps and editing that they used.
4. A. Most camera phone settings have options to adjust the aperture, shutter speed, and ISO. Instead of adjusting the brightness, which can distort the image, I can adjust those settings instead when I take a photo.
B. Play with the focus. iPhone cameras can typically focus on one object in the scene instead of the entire scene. This will create depth in the photo.
B. Play with the focus. iPhone cameras can typically focus on one object in the scene instead of the entire scene. This will create depth in the photo.
Saturday, April 30, 2016
HDR Photography Intro
1. What manipulations to the camera will you need to make to create an HDR image?
You'll need to equip the AEB function in the camera through the settings, however if that's not an option, then you'll have to change the settings manually and expose everything between each shot you take.
2. What equipment will we use to take this type of image?
A camera with AEB, a tripod to ensure that every photo will be in the same position (if that's what you want), and an HDR photo-blending program to blend the photos and add final touches.
3. What is the reason someone might take an HDR image?
HDR images are very vibrant and dreamlike. They have a very unique atmosphere to them that, depending on the lighting and the colors in the picture, can be very eerie or happy.
4. What can we expect to happen with the images once we merge them together, what will we see that we might have not seen with just one photo?
The final product will be something completely different. Every shadow and lighting will be expose in the photo and create a vibrancy in it. The photo will be very dark and yet very light, and it should have high-contrast.
You'll need to equip the AEB function in the camera through the settings, however if that's not an option, then you'll have to change the settings manually and expose everything between each shot you take.
2. What equipment will we use to take this type of image?
A camera with AEB, a tripod to ensure that every photo will be in the same position (if that's what you want), and an HDR photo-blending program to blend the photos and add final touches.
3. What is the reason someone might take an HDR image?
HDR images are very vibrant and dreamlike. They have a very unique atmosphere to them that, depending on the lighting and the colors in the picture, can be very eerie or happy.
4. What can we expect to happen with the images once we merge them together, what will we see that we might have not seen with just one photo?
The final product will be something completely different. Every shadow and lighting will be expose in the photo and create a vibrancy in it. The photo will be very dark and yet very light, and it should have high-contrast.
Final Exam Planning Warm-Up
1. When will you shoot this assignment?
Preferably, I would like to shoot my photos this weekend (April 30th), but the latest I would like to shoot my photos for the assignment would be next weekend.
2. Where will you shoot?
That depends, because I have three very different ideas for my shoot. Either I'll shoot the photos at my friends house, in front of my house in the garden, or at an observatory.
3. What will you be documenting or telling your story about?
My first two ideas were really simple. The first was to shoot photos of my friend painting, which is something that she does and enjoys a lot. I have a few ways to shoot the photos already in mind if I went with that.
The second idea was to photograph my mother gardening. Now that winter has passed and the warm weather is settling in, she's been working in the garden in the front of the house, and it's a long process that I could document.
My third idea would take a little bit more planning. My father is part of the Austin Astronomical Society and every few weekends they have a star party at the Observatory at Canyon of the Eagles. I wouldn't be able to take photos when the stars really set in, but the setting itself is nice. The only problems about this idea was timing - clear skies are not always guaranteed - and the fact that there's not much of a story for this idea. The benefits of this idea is that I could get a lot of nice photos and that I don't necessarily have to wait for the next star party because my father has private access to the observatory.
4. What equipment needs will you have to get this finished?
Preferably, I would like a tripod handy, but I can take photos without it just as well.
5. Describe the process.
I would like to use my video portions at the beginning when we're arriving and at the end when we're leaving. I would also like to include video image somewhere in the middle, though I don't know what of. The rest would be still images, and my narration would mostly be at the beginning and the end.
Preferably, I would like to shoot my photos this weekend (April 30th), but the latest I would like to shoot my photos for the assignment would be next weekend.
2. Where will you shoot?
That depends, because I have three very different ideas for my shoot. Either I'll shoot the photos at my friends house, in front of my house in the garden, or at an observatory.
3. What will you be documenting or telling your story about?
My first two ideas were really simple. The first was to shoot photos of my friend painting, which is something that she does and enjoys a lot. I have a few ways to shoot the photos already in mind if I went with that.
The second idea was to photograph my mother gardening. Now that winter has passed and the warm weather is settling in, she's been working in the garden in the front of the house, and it's a long process that I could document.
My third idea would take a little bit more planning. My father is part of the Austin Astronomical Society and every few weekends they have a star party at the Observatory at Canyon of the Eagles. I wouldn't be able to take photos when the stars really set in, but the setting itself is nice. The only problems about this idea was timing - clear skies are not always guaranteed - and the fact that there's not much of a story for this idea. The benefits of this idea is that I could get a lot of nice photos and that I don't necessarily have to wait for the next star party because my father has private access to the observatory.
4. What equipment needs will you have to get this finished?
Preferably, I would like a tripod handy, but I can take photos without it just as well.
5. Describe the process.
I would like to use my video portions at the beginning when we're arriving and at the end when we're leaving. I would also like to include video image somewhere in the middle, though I don't know what of. The rest would be still images, and my narration would mostly be at the beginning and the end.
Thursday, April 28, 2016
Illustrator Artwork
Presidential Politics commentary
Fitbit and other wearable technology story
Culture of Me Project story
Friday, April 22, 2016
Preview for Final Exam - Intro to iMovie
Websites: http://www.mindbites.com/lesson/160-intro-to-imovie and http://knowledge-innovation.wikispaces.com/Basic+Skills+for+iMovie
1. Using iMovie is an easy task once you know how the simple basics. To use iMovie, you would need a video camera, the tape or film of that video camera, a cable to connect the camera to the computer, and a Macintosh computer. Once all these things are available, you can open iMovie by clicking on the icon on your dashboard or wherever iMovie is stored on the computer. A window should come up and you should be able to select "Create a New Project" and name it. It's important to choose the correct video format as well.
There are three main parts on the iMovie layout - the view screen, the clips pit (it was actually very hard to hear what she was saying but it sounded like she was saying "clips pit") and the timeline. On the view screen, you can view your move and play it. In the clips pit, all your clips are stored.
The purpose of the timeline is so that you can place and arrange the clips you have in order to create a movie. It's good to note that there are two modes on the timeline - the Clips mode and the Time mode. The Clips mode shows only the clip, and it's recommended to use this mode whenever you're rearranging the order of your clips. The other mode, the Time mode, displays the length of the clip depending on the size of the clip. Basically, you can view the duration that a single clip will play and pinpoint when it'll transition to the next clip.
In order to capture videos on iMovie, you can choose one of two modes; Edit mode (represented by scissors) and Capture mode (represented by a camera). When you're transferring film from a video camera, you'd switch to Capture mode and then turn on the camera, which you'll then set to Playback mode. Once that's done, you can go back to the right spot and press play and then import to capture the film.
Editing is one of the most simple steps on iMovie. You can rearrange clips and add them to the timeline by clicking them, dragging them to the right spot, and then dropping them. You can "trim" a clip by selecting Time mode and then pulling on the edges of the clip to make it shorter or bring it back to its original length. Additionally, you can split clips into small pieces by dragging the playhead where you want to split it and then selecting "Split Clip at Playhead" under the Edit menu. In addition to that, you can copy and paste to duplicate a clip and highlight it and hit delete to erase a clip. Knowing how to edit an iMovie will give you access to a greater range of options to make your video better, such as Titles and Effects. Whenever you have inserted a Title or an Effect, you can preview how it will look in the final product, and then hit update once you're satisfied with how it turned out.
2. I already knew how to edit an iMovie a bit from messing around on the program a while back. It's pretty simple and easy to remember once you know how to do it, as well as creating a new project and all that.
3. I didn't really know that there were different modes that you could select, so that was something new for me to understand.
4. I'm not so concerned with editing the clips, but I'm worried about not getting the right number of clips or the right amount of time. Or even getting too many clips and not being able to choose a selected few. Most of all, the biggest thing I'm concerned about the project is choosing a good topic for it.
5. Once I brainstorm an idea that I would like to do for my project, I can get that done during the weekend of that week. After that, editing will be a breeze and I can probably plan out how I would like to rearrange my movie beforehand.
6. I actually really like the idea of doing an art project. Either I can do it myself and capture the process, or I can get one of my friends to do one. The idea of capturing the process of a painting is something I would enjoy, and I know people who would be glad to do it.
1. Using iMovie is an easy task once you know how the simple basics. To use iMovie, you would need a video camera, the tape or film of that video camera, a cable to connect the camera to the computer, and a Macintosh computer. Once all these things are available, you can open iMovie by clicking on the icon on your dashboard or wherever iMovie is stored on the computer. A window should come up and you should be able to select "Create a New Project" and name it. It's important to choose the correct video format as well.
There are three main parts on the iMovie layout - the view screen, the clips pit (it was actually very hard to hear what she was saying but it sounded like she was saying "clips pit") and the timeline. On the view screen, you can view your move and play it. In the clips pit, all your clips are stored.
The purpose of the timeline is so that you can place and arrange the clips you have in order to create a movie. It's good to note that there are two modes on the timeline - the Clips mode and the Time mode. The Clips mode shows only the clip, and it's recommended to use this mode whenever you're rearranging the order of your clips. The other mode, the Time mode, displays the length of the clip depending on the size of the clip. Basically, you can view the duration that a single clip will play and pinpoint when it'll transition to the next clip.
In order to capture videos on iMovie, you can choose one of two modes; Edit mode (represented by scissors) and Capture mode (represented by a camera). When you're transferring film from a video camera, you'd switch to Capture mode and then turn on the camera, which you'll then set to Playback mode. Once that's done, you can go back to the right spot and press play and then import to capture the film.
Editing is one of the most simple steps on iMovie. You can rearrange clips and add them to the timeline by clicking them, dragging them to the right spot, and then dropping them. You can "trim" a clip by selecting Time mode and then pulling on the edges of the clip to make it shorter or bring it back to its original length. Additionally, you can split clips into small pieces by dragging the playhead where you want to split it and then selecting "Split Clip at Playhead" under the Edit menu. In addition to that, you can copy and paste to duplicate a clip and highlight it and hit delete to erase a clip. Knowing how to edit an iMovie will give you access to a greater range of options to make your video better, such as Titles and Effects. Whenever you have inserted a Title or an Effect, you can preview how it will look in the final product, and then hit update once you're satisfied with how it turned out.
2. I already knew how to edit an iMovie a bit from messing around on the program a while back. It's pretty simple and easy to remember once you know how to do it, as well as creating a new project and all that.
3. I didn't really know that there were different modes that you could select, so that was something new for me to understand.
4. I'm not so concerned with editing the clips, but I'm worried about not getting the right number of clips or the right amount of time. Or even getting too many clips and not being able to choose a selected few. Most of all, the biggest thing I'm concerned about the project is choosing a good topic for it.
5. Once I brainstorm an idea that I would like to do for my project, I can get that done during the weekend of that week. After that, editing will be a breeze and I can probably plan out how I would like to rearrange my movie beforehand.
6. I actually really like the idea of doing an art project. Either I can do it myself and capture the process, or I can get one of my friends to do one. The idea of capturing the process of a painting is something I would enjoy, and I know people who would be glad to do it.
Wednesday, April 20, 2016
My Opinions Story
Topic: Should teachers reduce the amount of homework that is given to students?
Whether you've just come from
an after school club, a sports practice or hanging out with friends, we all
know that feeling after school when your mind has been rung out for a little
more than 7 hours of school. We all know the dread of having to face our daily
given burden: homework. Many of us have begun to feel like homework is
taking over our life outside of class.
High school teachers aim to
assign high school students an average of 3.5 hours of homework per week. That
may not seem like a lot, but consider that students may receive homework from
at least five of their teachers. Once, you take that into account, high school
students receive approximately 17.5 hours of homework a week. Divide that by
the number of days in the school week, not counting weekends, it averages out
to 3.5 hours of homework a night.
In a 24 hour period during
the school week, the average high school student spends approximately 7 hours
at school, 2 hours getting to and from school, 5 hours doing daily things like
eating, dressing, and showering, and 8 hours of sleeping. All together, that’s
22 hours out of the 24 hour day, leaving only 2 hours in the day for students
to spend time on homework, after school activities like clubs or sports, family
time, and relaxation. However, high school students are given 3.5 hours of
homework a night by our previous calculations, which leaves no time whatsoever
for students to relax or enjoy things that spark their interest.
So why are we spending so much time on
homework? During the 1960s when the Soviet Union successfully launched Sputnik
1, The U.S. Department of Education upped the amount of homework students were
required to have per week in fear that U.S. students in the U.S. were not being
educated enough. This was merely of act of one-upping the other side. Back
then, homework was simple memorization and not as complex as the homework
today. These days, teachers assign students much more complex assignments, but
they have not decreased the amount of homework that students are receiving.
High school students are gaining the same amount of homework, but it takes much
longer to complete the work.
Homework is not a bad thing. It
allows students to practice their skills outside of class, and it’s been proven
to help students gain time management skills, learn responsibility and
perseverance, and build up their self-esteem.
However, a study at the Stanford
Graduate School of Education found that too much homework can diminish its
effectiveness and counter the benefits. Too much homework causes students to
experience greater stress, which can lead to both mental and physical health
problems like sleep deprivation (insomnia), anxiety, weight loss, and constant
headaches. Not only that, but like we established earlier, students do not have
enough time in their 24 hour day to engage with friends, family or pursue their
interests, decreasing their social and extracurricular skills, and thus they do
not have a way to diminish their stress. The stress continues to build up, and
students may develop a lower self-esteem and a tendency to procrastinate.
The quality of the homework does not need to
decrease, but the amount of homework does. Teachers need to take their students
into consideration and assign less homework so that they can safely manage
their time between their interests and their schoolwork. Alternatively,
teachers can give students more time to work in class so that they will have
less to do at home. Students need to find a way to balance homework,
extracurricular activities, and social time on their own, but they will never
have the chance if teachers keep assigning the amount of homework that they do
now.
Monday, April 18, 2016
SNO Online Papers
The Eagle's Tale - "Love without borders"
http://eaglestaleonline.com/opinion/2015/10/01/love-without-borders/
1. Avery Cummings, the Co-Editor-in-Chief, wrote the article.
2. Cummings' story is about her personal experience in an interracial relationship and her dismay at her family, friends, and peers who do not completely accept her relationship with her Mexican-born hispanic partner. She also expresses how her relationship with her partner and his family opened her up to other cultures.
3. "However, instead of staring with a gaping mouth or rude eyes, at least smile. It can be disheartening to be stared at in public all the time due mainly to a difference in skin color. We are all human, regardless of skin color."
"I have a found a much more satisfying world in one entirely different than my own. One where I learn new things every day, and one where I teach my own culture every day. It is through this new world that I was able to understand and no longer fear other cultures."
4. Yes. She addresses the reactions of her family members and friends acknowledges their concerns.
5. Cummings notes that the reactions her family and friends had might've been different if her partner had been American-born, but she's firm about her disapproval of their non-acceptance.
6. She quotes a reaction that her family and friends had to her relationship.
7. Cummings wrote in first person.
Coppell Student Media - "Why Coppell citizens should care about the water crisis in Michigan"
http://coppellstudentmedia.com/64866/opinions/why-coppell-citizens-should-care-about-the-water-crisis-in-michigan/
1. The article was written by Staff Writer, Jasmine Sun.
2. Sun's addresses the water crisis in Flint, Michigan and explains why Coppell citizens, despite living far from the incident and being unaffected by it, should care about it. She emphasizes her point that people should care even if they are unaffected because indifference and inaction can have dire consequences.
3. "But you may be wondering, why should I care? I live on the other side of the country. Lead in the water doesn’t affect me. . .And that is the exact problem. Because people do not care unless they are personally affected, water crises like these can continue to happen, all around the country and globe. . . People should be at least aware of the potential problems that water can have and how local government officials can address those problems."
4. Sun acknowledges reasons why people wouldn't care about faraway incidents, listing that it's because they are being unaffected by the incident.
5. No, she's very firm in her article.
6. Yes. Sun quotes students and teachers from Coppell High School.
7. She wrote in third person.
The Mustang Messenger - "College: Make it Accessible to All"
http://cyranchnews.com/4583/opinion-2/college-make-it-accessible-to-all/
1. The article is written by Shajid Hasan.
2. Hansan's article is about the rising tuition for colleges and universities. He states that college education has become increasingly significant for many Americans to pursue a successful career, however only students and their families that can survive the financial strain of college tuition are able to pursue a college education. Hansan argues that college should be made available to everyone and that the US should provide free college education.
3. "So, the United States lags behind a bit more. We decide that we’re not going to innovate and become better. We want to stay with Cold War-era politics in which “We The Best” is the motto. We’re limiting ourselves with just keeping our old values. We have to change our society for the better. So for the benefit of our nation we know what to do. To make sure we won’t be outsourced we have to have a strong industrious nation. We need to get rid of our increasing income gap. We need to adopt the practice of free college. Because if we don’t, “we” will no longer be relevant."
4. No, the writer does not address the other side of the argument.
5. Yes, he's very firm about his opinion on the topic.
6. Hasan does not include direct quotes but cites statistics relating to his argument.
7. He writes mostly in third person (the writer avoids the usage of "I" "me", and "my") but later in the article, he uses first person ("In my opinion. . .")
http://eaglestaleonline.com/opinion/2015/10/01/love-without-borders/
1. Avery Cummings, the Co-Editor-in-Chief, wrote the article.
2. Cummings' story is about her personal experience in an interracial relationship and her dismay at her family, friends, and peers who do not completely accept her relationship with her Mexican-born hispanic partner. She also expresses how her relationship with her partner and his family opened her up to other cultures.
3. "However, instead of staring with a gaping mouth or rude eyes, at least smile. It can be disheartening to be stared at in public all the time due mainly to a difference in skin color. We are all human, regardless of skin color."
"I have a found a much more satisfying world in one entirely different than my own. One where I learn new things every day, and one where I teach my own culture every day. It is through this new world that I was able to understand and no longer fear other cultures."
4. Yes. She addresses the reactions of her family members and friends acknowledges their concerns.
5. Cummings notes that the reactions her family and friends had might've been different if her partner had been American-born, but she's firm about her disapproval of their non-acceptance.
6. She quotes a reaction that her family and friends had to her relationship.
7. Cummings wrote in first person.
Coppell Student Media - "Why Coppell citizens should care about the water crisis in Michigan"
http://coppellstudentmedia.com/64866/opinions/why-coppell-citizens-should-care-about-the-water-crisis-in-michigan/
1. The article was written by Staff Writer, Jasmine Sun.
2. Sun's addresses the water crisis in Flint, Michigan and explains why Coppell citizens, despite living far from the incident and being unaffected by it, should care about it. She emphasizes her point that people should care even if they are unaffected because indifference and inaction can have dire consequences.
3. "But you may be wondering, why should I care? I live on the other side of the country. Lead in the water doesn’t affect me. . .And that is the exact problem. Because people do not care unless they are personally affected, water crises like these can continue to happen, all around the country and globe. . . People should be at least aware of the potential problems that water can have and how local government officials can address those problems."
4. Sun acknowledges reasons why people wouldn't care about faraway incidents, listing that it's because they are being unaffected by the incident.
5. No, she's very firm in her article.
6. Yes. Sun quotes students and teachers from Coppell High School.
7. She wrote in third person.
The Mustang Messenger - "College: Make it Accessible to All"
http://cyranchnews.com/4583/opinion-2/college-make-it-accessible-to-all/
1. The article is written by Shajid Hasan.
2. Hansan's article is about the rising tuition for colleges and universities. He states that college education has become increasingly significant for many Americans to pursue a successful career, however only students and their families that can survive the financial strain of college tuition are able to pursue a college education. Hansan argues that college should be made available to everyone and that the US should provide free college education.
3. "So, the United States lags behind a bit more. We decide that we’re not going to innovate and become better. We want to stay with Cold War-era politics in which “We The Best” is the motto. We’re limiting ourselves with just keeping our old values. We have to change our society for the better. So for the benefit of our nation we know what to do. To make sure we won’t be outsourced we have to have a strong industrious nation. We need to get rid of our increasing income gap. We need to adopt the practice of free college. Because if we don’t, “we” will no longer be relevant."
4. No, the writer does not address the other side of the argument.
5. Yes, he's very firm about his opinion on the topic.
6. Hasan does not include direct quotes but cites statistics relating to his argument.
7. He writes mostly in third person (the writer avoids the usage of "I" "me", and "my") but later in the article, he uses first person ("In my opinion. . .")
Opinions Writing Part 2
"How to Write Personal Essays and Opinion Pieces"
1. The article suggests that the writer choose a topic that is conversational for them. The topic that the writer chooses should be one that they find intriguing and that they feel strongly about - whether they feel angry, sad, or happy about that topic. Most of all, the writer needs to choose a topic that the reader can relate and emphasize with.
2. The writer should not make broad and boring observations. The writer should be very specific about their own opinion or experience and how they felt. The writer shouldn't make declarations of their feelings, but instead use specific details and phrases that emphasize how they were feeling.
3. Suggestions:
"Make connections. If you’re writing about a global theme (poverty, unemployment, child abuse) bring the subject closer to home by relating it to specific, individual examples. If you’re writing about more mundane subjects (left-hand turn signals, the search for the best French Fries, your daughter’s graduation) again, set your views against a wider backdrop or perspective so the reader can relate to it."
"Think of your essay as a camera lens. You might start by describing a fine detail (your personal experience or perspective, a specific moment in the narrative), then open up the lens to take in the wide view (the general/global backdrop), then close the piece by narrowing back to the fine detail. Or go the other way. Start with the wide view, focus in, then open up to the wide view again."
"No extra points for the number of facts you include. Academic essays contain more facts than opinion, personal essays contain more opinion than facts. But ensure the facts you use are accurate. Check names, spellings, numbers. Two sources of confirmation are better than one."
1. The article suggests that the writer choose a topic that is conversational for them. The topic that the writer chooses should be one that they find intriguing and that they feel strongly about - whether they feel angry, sad, or happy about that topic. Most of all, the writer needs to choose a topic that the reader can relate and emphasize with.
2. The writer should not make broad and boring observations. The writer should be very specific about their own opinion or experience and how they felt. The writer shouldn't make declarations of their feelings, but instead use specific details and phrases that emphasize how they were feeling.
3. Suggestions:
"Make connections. If you’re writing about a global theme (poverty, unemployment, child abuse) bring the subject closer to home by relating it to specific, individual examples. If you’re writing about more mundane subjects (left-hand turn signals, the search for the best French Fries, your daughter’s graduation) again, set your views against a wider backdrop or perspective so the reader can relate to it."
"Think of your essay as a camera lens. You might start by describing a fine detail (your personal experience or perspective, a specific moment in the narrative), then open up the lens to take in the wide view (the general/global backdrop), then close the piece by narrowing back to the fine detail. Or go the other way. Start with the wide view, focus in, then open up to the wide view again."
"No extra points for the number of facts you include. Academic essays contain more facts than opinion, personal essays contain more opinion than facts. But ensure the facts you use are accurate. Check names, spellings, numbers. Two sources of confirmation are better than one."
Thursday, April 14, 2016
Opinions writing preview activity
Story 1 - Apple refuses to violate privacy of users
1. The story was written by the Editorial
2. The story is about how the FBI wants Apple to create a program in which they could investigate the contents of the San Bernardino's shooters phone without unlocking it.
3. The author firmly believes that the FBI does not have the authority to ask this of Apple because the FBI would potentially be able to violate the privacy of anyone's phone with such a program.
"Although the phone could yield valuable information, we believe that the FBI is asking Apple for too much at the risk of all other iPhone owners."
4. The other side of the argument is (sort of) addressed. The author includes points contradicting to their own argument, but disregards or proves them wrong.
5. No. They made it very clear that their opinion would not be changed.
6. There are no quotes in the story.
7. The story was written in 3rd person.
Story 2 - Beyonce causes controversy
1. The story was written by Fuaad Ajaz
2. Ajaz writes about how Beyonce's recent music video, "Formation", and her performance during the Super Bowl halftime in which she tackles topics like police brutality and modern-day discrimination against minority groups has created controversy and outrage among some americans.
3. The writer believes that Beyonce is doing the right thing and that americans should not be outraged at Beyonce for expressing her opinion about topics that are serious and that she is entitled to discuss.
"But, for some reason, there was a noisy backlash against her expression of opinion. Apparently when someone points out that something unfair is happening to a to a minority group, and that person happens to be a popular black female artist, critics yelp when that someone states the obvious. Why?"
4. The author very briefly mentions what the other side of the controversy thought, but he barely regards them and drives the story with his opinion of the controversy.
5. No, he was not wishy-washy about his opinion and he held onto it firmly.
6. There are quotes included from lyrics from Beyonce's song, "Formation".
7. The story is written in 3rd person.
Story 3 - Is the AP World history test worth it?
1. The story was written by Mia Barbosa.
2. The story Barbosa wrote is about how Bowie high school students have the opportunity to earn college credit by taking the AP World History test. She writes about the fee to take the tests, what the test contains, and the preparation that is offered to students who are wishing to take the test
3. Barbosa believes that the test is worth taking because of the possibility of earning college credit and because so much preparation is offered to students who are taking the test.
"I think that the test is a great way for students to get ahead in the competitive race for college."
"I think that more tests like this need to be offered to student so that way they can prepare for the future better and save money."
4. The author discusses both sides regarding the AP test, but she does not change her own opinion about the topic.
5. She was not wishy-washy.
6. There are no quotes in the story.
7. The story is written in 1st person.
Story 4 - Social media, back at it again
1. The story was written by Alicia Molina
2. Molina writes about a recent Snapchat story that has become famous on social media. "Damn Daniel" has taken a popular hit with many teens and has caught the attention of celebrities, including Ellen.
3. The writer believes that the meme has become annoying in the weeks that it's been around, as many people are trying to imitate it themselves and repeatedly say it, however she expresses how she's glad that Josh and Daniel, the creators of the meme, are putting their fame to good use.
"...I would hear "Damn Daniel," from across the hall and it would bug me even more than the time before."
"I think that it's great that people are using their fame for good..."
4. Barbosa acknowledges that everyone else continued to find the meme funny even after some time had assed.
5. No, she was not wishy-washy, and she did not change her opinion.
6. The writer quoted a tweet that Daniel posted.
7. The story was written in 1st person.
Story 5 - Drug dog investigation have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school
1. The story was written by Granger Coats.
2. Coats' story is about the controversial punishment that is given to student who possess marijuana (the controversy is that students who possess less than the amount of a felony offense (four or more ounces) are also being punished). Those who are punished are escorted home and sent to Disciplinary Alternative Education Program (DAEP) and possibly later to Alternative Learning Center (ALC).
3. Coats believes that the punishments are wrongfully causing students to bet behind on classwork, which will impact their understanding and education. She believes that the punishment should only be reserved for severe cases in which the student may cause harm to the school, others, or themselves. She believes that students feel intimidated and are having their rights violated.
"...I believe the DAEP should deb a punishment saved only for severe cases such as students considered a threat to the school, the well-being of the students, or themselves."
4. Barbosa regards both sides of the argument and she supports effective school security, but this does not change her opinion on the current system and regulations.
5. No, she was very firm about her opinion.
6. She quoted the AISD student code of conduct.
7. The story was written in 1st person.
A.
1. A hard news story recounts the events that happened in the recent past (yesterday, earlier in the week, the previous week, ect.) and provides solid facts about what happened. An opinion's piece briefly explains the situation and provides facts about it, but the writer can be more selective about the information they put in their story.
2. The writer cannot take a stand or side in a hard news story. In an opinion's piece, the writer has the freedom to express their thoughts and side of the story.
3. Hard news stories require quotations from people who were interviewed on the matter of the story. In an opinion story, the writer does not need to do this and can provide quotes if they would like to in order to back up their stand.
B. I think that there aren't many photo on this page because then photos might draw the attention away from the story. Photos are also often included to back up the story and to provide an image of the story's topic. An opinion's piece does not include many photos other than to complement it and show who the writer is, and because the focus should be on the piece itself, not the pictures that accompany it.
C. 1. Should teachers give less homework? (My opinion on this is that teachers should reduce the amount of homework that they assign to students because the overloading amount of homework that students receive often cause them to stress out, lose sleep, and miss out on activities that they enjoy. Also, homework does not guarantee that
2. Should students be required to take a speech or debate class? (Yes, because taking a speech or debate class allows student to build communication skills that will help them later in life, to build writing and researching skills, and to become comfortable with talking in front of a large crowd. Occasionally, it may also also students to express their thoughts on the topic.)
3. Do we really need endorsement plans? (No, because endorsement plans limit the type of classes that you can take and because many students feel as if they have less options in high school. Students should be allowed to take any class they want without having to worry if they're meeting the requirements of their endorsement plan. Many students have a Multidisciplinary endorsement plan, which is basically allowing students to take any class they want. The other endorsement plans should be eliminated because they only limit a student's options.)
1. The story was written by the Editorial
2. The story is about how the FBI wants Apple to create a program in which they could investigate the contents of the San Bernardino's shooters phone without unlocking it.
3. The author firmly believes that the FBI does not have the authority to ask this of Apple because the FBI would potentially be able to violate the privacy of anyone's phone with such a program.
"Although the phone could yield valuable information, we believe that the FBI is asking Apple for too much at the risk of all other iPhone owners."
4. The other side of the argument is (sort of) addressed. The author includes points contradicting to their own argument, but disregards or proves them wrong.
5. No. They made it very clear that their opinion would not be changed.
6. There are no quotes in the story.
7. The story was written in 3rd person.
Story 2 - Beyonce causes controversy
1. The story was written by Fuaad Ajaz
2. Ajaz writes about how Beyonce's recent music video, "Formation", and her performance during the Super Bowl halftime in which she tackles topics like police brutality and modern-day discrimination against minority groups has created controversy and outrage among some americans.
3. The writer believes that Beyonce is doing the right thing and that americans should not be outraged at Beyonce for expressing her opinion about topics that are serious and that she is entitled to discuss.
"But, for some reason, there was a noisy backlash against her expression of opinion. Apparently when someone points out that something unfair is happening to a to a minority group, and that person happens to be a popular black female artist, critics yelp when that someone states the obvious. Why?"
4. The author very briefly mentions what the other side of the controversy thought, but he barely regards them and drives the story with his opinion of the controversy.
5. No, he was not wishy-washy about his opinion and he held onto it firmly.
6. There are quotes included from lyrics from Beyonce's song, "Formation".
7. The story is written in 3rd person.
Story 3 - Is the AP World history test worth it?
1. The story was written by Mia Barbosa.
2. The story Barbosa wrote is about how Bowie high school students have the opportunity to earn college credit by taking the AP World History test. She writes about the fee to take the tests, what the test contains, and the preparation that is offered to students who are wishing to take the test
3. Barbosa believes that the test is worth taking because of the possibility of earning college credit and because so much preparation is offered to students who are taking the test.
"I think that the test is a great way for students to get ahead in the competitive race for college."
"I think that more tests like this need to be offered to student so that way they can prepare for the future better and save money."
4. The author discusses both sides regarding the AP test, but she does not change her own opinion about the topic.
5. She was not wishy-washy.
6. There are no quotes in the story.
7. The story is written in 1st person.
Story 4 - Social media, back at it again
1. The story was written by Alicia Molina
2. Molina writes about a recent Snapchat story that has become famous on social media. "Damn Daniel" has taken a popular hit with many teens and has caught the attention of celebrities, including Ellen.
3. The writer believes that the meme has become annoying in the weeks that it's been around, as many people are trying to imitate it themselves and repeatedly say it, however she expresses how she's glad that Josh and Daniel, the creators of the meme, are putting their fame to good use.
"...I would hear "Damn Daniel," from across the hall and it would bug me even more than the time before."
"I think that it's great that people are using their fame for good..."
4. Barbosa acknowledges that everyone else continued to find the meme funny even after some time had assed.
5. No, she was not wishy-washy, and she did not change her opinion.
6. The writer quoted a tweet that Daniel posted.
7. The story was written in 1st person.
Story 5 - Drug dog investigation have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school
1. The story was written by Granger Coats.
2. Coats' story is about the controversial punishment that is given to student who possess marijuana (the controversy is that students who possess less than the amount of a felony offense (four or more ounces) are also being punished). Those who are punished are escorted home and sent to Disciplinary Alternative Education Program (DAEP) and possibly later to Alternative Learning Center (ALC).
3. Coats believes that the punishments are wrongfully causing students to bet behind on classwork, which will impact their understanding and education. She believes that the punishment should only be reserved for severe cases in which the student may cause harm to the school, others, or themselves. She believes that students feel intimidated and are having their rights violated.
"...I believe the DAEP should deb a punishment saved only for severe cases such as students considered a threat to the school, the well-being of the students, or themselves."
4. Barbosa regards both sides of the argument and she supports effective school security, but this does not change her opinion on the current system and regulations.
5. No, she was very firm about her opinion.
6. She quoted the AISD student code of conduct.
7. The story was written in 1st person.
A.
1. A hard news story recounts the events that happened in the recent past (yesterday, earlier in the week, the previous week, ect.) and provides solid facts about what happened. An opinion's piece briefly explains the situation and provides facts about it, but the writer can be more selective about the information they put in their story.
2. The writer cannot take a stand or side in a hard news story. In an opinion's piece, the writer has the freedom to express their thoughts and side of the story.
3. Hard news stories require quotations from people who were interviewed on the matter of the story. In an opinion story, the writer does not need to do this and can provide quotes if they would like to in order to back up their stand.
B. I think that there aren't many photo on this page because then photos might draw the attention away from the story. Photos are also often included to back up the story and to provide an image of the story's topic. An opinion's piece does not include many photos other than to complement it and show who the writer is, and because the focus should be on the piece itself, not the pictures that accompany it.
C. 1. Should teachers give less homework? (My opinion on this is that teachers should reduce the amount of homework that they assign to students because the overloading amount of homework that students receive often cause them to stress out, lose sleep, and miss out on activities that they enjoy. Also, homework does not guarantee that
2. Should students be required to take a speech or debate class? (Yes, because taking a speech or debate class allows student to build communication skills that will help them later in life, to build writing and researching skills, and to become comfortable with talking in front of a large crowd. Occasionally, it may also also students to express their thoughts on the topic.)
3. Do we really need endorsement plans? (No, because endorsement plans limit the type of classes that you can take and because many students feel as if they have less options in high school. Students should be allowed to take any class they want without having to worry if they're meeting the requirements of their endorsement plan. Many students have a Multidisciplinary endorsement plan, which is basically allowing students to take any class they want. The other endorsement plans should be eliminated because they only limit a student's options.)
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8-10 Paragraphs (350 words) - 50 points
5 Quotes - 25 points
Inverted Pyramid - 25 points
Extra Credit - None
TOTAL - 100 points
8-10 Paragraphs (350 words) - 50 points
5 Quotes - 25 points
Inverted Pyramid - 25 points
Extra Credit - None
TOTAL - 100 points
Tuesday, April 12, 2016
Earthquake Story
Californians felt the ground tremble and shake beneath their
feet early Monday morning when an earthquake struck the San Francisco Bay area
around 8:12 a.m. PDT.
Although the tremors from the earthquake could be felt
throughout the Bay area, Hayward suffered the greatest damage from the
earthquake.
The epicenter of the earthquake, located beneath Hayward
Hills, had a magnitude of 6.4 on the Richter scale as stated by Penny Gertz, a
scientist from the U.S. Geological Survey in Menlo Park.
Hayward, like many other California cities, sits directly on
a major fault line.
According to Gertz, the earthquake erupted from the Hayward
Fault, which ran underneath Hayward Hills. Gertz added that this particular
quake was “a strong one” and that people as far as Los Angeles and Redding felt
tremors from the quake.
The earthquake, however, left a heavier imprint on a few Californians than it did on others.
Jennifer Vu, a public information officer from the Hayward
Fire Department, reported that the earthquake rocked McHenry’s Auto Supply on
2342 Plum St. and partially collapsed the building.
Luckily, less than 10 people were affected by the collapse.
Two people were killed and six were injured, Vu said. Three
of the six people suffered severe injuries and were hospitalized at the Hayward
General Hospital, she detailed, but luckily there have been no other reports of
serious injuries in Hayward.
Law enforcement and public safety services immediately
kicked into action to search the scene for survivors and aid those who had been
injured by the quake.
Twenty-one fire personnel, twelve police officers and five
American Red Cross workers arrived at the rubble where McHenry’s Auto Supply
once stood, Vu stated, some arriving within mere minutes of the quake and the
building’s collapse.
No other buildings close to the site of the building’s
location collapsed, but residents nearby were very aware of the incident.
Mike Beamer, who lives in the apartment right across the
street from McHenry’s, described that he could feel the building’s collapse for
the 30 seconds that it lasted, with a big jolt right in the middle.
“I was eating my breakfast when the room started rolling. I
dove under the table just as I heard an explosion outside and a chunk of cement
flew through my kitchen window. That’s when the screaming start across the
street,” Beamer detailed.
Hayward residents are expecting to make a recovery from the
quake and be prepared for the next time a quake hits, and those killed will be remembered.
Names of the dead are being withheld pending notifications of families, said Vu.
Names of the dead are being withheld pending notifications of families, said Vu.
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